Eating Right

I'll take a dog and a beer.  I think that's eating right, don't you? This is a review that I did for an article about eating right and it is posted on their website that is called differentwayofliving.com.

This article was about eating right.  It was a very well-written article with interesting information.  It flowed well and was a pleasure to read.  I enjoyed it.

I thought the beginning was clever.  I like how they tell the reader at the beginning that they will tell them about eating right.  The author sounded confident and the reader will like that feeling coming through in the writing.

The next paragraph included a lot of interesting information.  The discussion about the food pyramid was smart to incorporate.  they continued to five the audience good advice about how to eat right.

The last paragraph had a nice touch to it.  They talked about suggesting that they eat right for a month and see how it will affect the person. They thought it would give them more energy.  This was really good,  It was kind of a goal that was set for them.  This will probably give them the opportunity to try a new diet and see what happens.  Great idea.  It was also handled fine.  You have to be careful how you approach this with your audience.  Good article with good information.

http://www.differentwayofliving.com/2009/02/15/eating-right.html